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Here he is in all his glory
Styling a green suit of money
Wearing his styling shades
As he held a double-edge red guitar

His company is booming
But the forest is dying
Truffela trees fall
As the tufts are harvested

He's consumed by greed
Making a profit is in his mind
Being at the top of the world
He's got everything he needs

He's the Prince of Thneeds
The maker of his creation
Started as an impossible dream
Has now became reality

But at what cost
Valley is decayed
He lost his friends
Family has abandoned him

All he has left is his old factory
The green suit that he wore
The first thneed around his neck
He was all alone with nothing left
When I was waiting for the internet to come back on I wrote a poem about Once-Ler when he was in Greed Mode and how he lost everything because of his greed.
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Team-Van-Helsing Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful poem, if a bit sad.
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FairyGal11 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks ALSO GO CHECK out releaselog and sceper-THE MOVIE IS viral!
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Team-Van-Helsing Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What are "releaselog and sceper" exactly?
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FairyGal11 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Websites and also check out my recent journal :3
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Team-Van-Helsing Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mmkay, i'll try to when I got some time.
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FairyGal11 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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